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Keep your head Darling by ~redmoonseclipse:iconredmoonseclipse:





They never give you an inch do they darling?
Kicking you when you’re down
And draining the last drop of confidence
Like vampires of the night

But don’t worry darling,
Just keep your head
And everything will be all right

I wish I could silence their cruel mouths
I wish I could wipe the wicked smiles from their faces
And I wish I could stop their quick fists
From ever touching you

But don’t worry darling,
Just keep your head
And everything will be all right

It’s hard to stand up to them when no one’s by your side
And you don’t feel like going on
But don’t let them take you darling,
Don’t let them win

But don’t worry darling,
Just keep your head
And everything will be all right

We are one and the same, darling
You and I…but you can’t see me
Because I never stood up to them
And my silence cost me my life
Please, please…
Don’t let silence take yours too
©2005-2009 ~redmoonseclipse
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Submitted: December 9, 2005
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This is just a poem about the effects of bullying, focusing on the mob mentallity mostly. Just got bored and fed up with some people and this is the result.
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that is heavy, and beautifully construed. almost a helpless feeling comes from it, yet quiet determination..

lovely work holly. :love:

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LOL, would it be redundant to say this poem is extremely poetic? But yeah, I really dig this one. Picturing in my head the narrator after her death being assigned to the subject as a guardian angel of sorts. Very nice work darling. ;)

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:D Thank you very much ^^ Darling xD

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;3 awwh wow, great job holly! I like the effect in the end about the silencing. Also I like the use of imagery of the sinister and cruel mouths. o.o

:+fav: just cos you always fav. me and cos I really liked this!

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